The Pitch.

Here are some documentations of our presentation in which we gave a one minute pitch to show what we intended to do. We had planned our timing well and our presentation ended right on time which shows good management but comments from the audience brought up some strong points such as whether the film was to be more about the fact its in first person or the tattoo, or if the tattoo was even needed at all. We were told to use to the tattoo as an idea/starting point with the choice of branching away and developing towards something different. The point was also brought up about how we said we were going to focus more on the stress and anxiety of getting a tattoo yet we seemed to be more focused on the process of just having the tattoo scene where it gets done. That was an eye opener and we began to look at different ways of shooting the situation.